Lockwood & Co. The screaming staircase, Johnathan Stroud

If you could rewrite one part of the story, what would you change?

In the beginning of the book you have a couple chapters that make sense and then a chapter that is a little like a prologue but a good way into the book, so more like a flash back. If I were to re-write one thing in the book, I would switch the order around, so the prologue/flashback is at the beginning of the book and then re-write it so that the Prologue told you a little what it is about instead of just launching into something you have no back ground information about. 

-Isla